From Bad to Worse
It wasn’t the evening that he planned. He brought her a small bouquet of
flowers and took her to a moderately expensive restaurant for dinner. They
walked along holding hands as the window shopped. She wanted to stroll through the downtown and
relax after the meal.
It wasn’t his fault that the heel of her shoe snapped off. No stores were
still open to buy another pair. He couldn’t hail a taxi and her limping walk
slowed them even more; shoe foot, bare foot, shoe foot.
He managed not to laugh when she stepped in some dog feces that an
uncaring dog owner hadn’t collected. A nearby puddle of water on the walk
beneath an air conditioner gave her some relief, then he gave her his
handkerchief to wipe the worst of it away.
A sprinkle of rain began to intrude on their evening. He found shelter
for them in a doorway with a sagging canvas awning, as the rain became a
downpour. The awning filled, sagging more. A tearing sound, then a cascade of
water as the awning gave way. His date was drenched. Water dripped from her
hair and the hem of her dress.
He didn’t think his comment of “It may help to get rid of the doggie doo”
made her feel any better. She gave me one of those “How dare you” looks. Her
icy stare told me that the evening wasn’t going to end well.
Unable to hail a taxi, we caught a bus as it rolled by. We climbed
aboard. Because of the rain, the bus was packed, with standing room only. All
of the passengers stared at her as though she was an Apocalypse Zombie and
moved to give her room. He had to admit that she didn’t look her best, but the
crowd parted and gave them room. A puddle formed where we stood.
We exited the bus and it was still pouring. We were a block from her
home. Silence reigned. I escorted her to her porch. She unlocked the door and
went inside. There was no kiss, no hug, and not even a thank you. I said “Good
night.” The bang of the door was my only answer.
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