So, instead, I thought I'd post a flash fiction story. We were challenged to write a short story, one that is 00 words or less. mine is 245. I hope that you like it.
Long and Short
They walked into a bank
close to downtown. Sam leaned close and said, “Gimme a bag, Dana.” Dana pulled
a cloth bag from a larger one she carried. Each moved to stand in front of a
teller. Sam pulled out a revolver and said, “Hand over the money. Put it on the
counter. Empty your drawers, now. This is a robbery.”
Rifling through the
bills, they made sure there were no dye packs, then shoved the cash into their
sacks. Turning, the couple exited the bank. Slowly, they strolled away, mingling
with the lunchtime crowd on the street.
The police swarmed
the bank. They surveyed the banks recordings and began to search for the
couple: a white male dressed in jeans, blue hoodie, and a ball cap pulled over
his eyes and a white female wearing tight black spandex pants, a gray hoodie,
and a pulled down ball cap. The descriptions matched several other local
heists.
An APB was sent out.
An intense search started.
An hour later, a
couple checked out of a hotel, three blocks from the bank. The tall woman and
her slender boyfriend walked to the bus station, right by the bank where the
activity still swirled.
The large woman
approached a policeman. Sitting her suitcase on the sidewalk, she asked, “What’s
happening, officer?”
“A bank robbery,
ma’am.”
“Goodness!” her
reply.
Dana picked up his
heavy suitcase and said, “We need to go, Samantha. We’ll miss our bus.”
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